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Marthe48

(20,362 posts)
Fri Mar 14, 2025, 10:57 AM Mar 14

I wrote this poem in 2005

Inspired by daffodils

Continuum

In this empty place
there is peace

the sense of time gone by

Amid bare trees, their limbs upraised
to the spring blue sky,

submerged in greening grass
there are mossy rocks
tumbled long ago

--foundation walls, supporting nothing now

walls and roof long returned to earth

Almost by the trees

that row of tiny brilliant suns

was planted there by long-forgotten hands

small clumps ease nearer to the patient humble stones

Its almost quiet now
you only hear the wind
scraping branches
soughing through the grass

In this empty place
the lengths of time -- then and now --

lay side-by-side

What once was, will it be again?

There is no agreement

but gently

the daffodils nod.

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I wrote this poem in 2005 (Original Post) Marthe48 Mar 14 OP
BEAUTIFUL !!!!! I SEE THE HULK OF OUR DEMOCRACY IN IT !!!!!! Karadeniz Mar 14 #1
In southeast Ohio Marthe48 Mar 14 #3
That's beautiful and resonant wendyb-NC Mar 14 #2
Thank you Marthe48 Mar 14 #4
Lovely! BobTheSubgenius Mar 16 #5
Thank you Marthe48 Mar 16 #6

Marthe48

(20,362 posts)
3. In southeast Ohio
Fri Mar 14, 2025, 11:14 AM
Mar 14

The remains of early farms are scattered all through the area, in the fields, woods, down in the valleys, and in the hills. Seems like no matter where the homestead was, you'll find the foundation stones and daffodils, reminders of the earliest European settlers who tried to make a go of carving their niche out of the land. No one will get rich here, but the beauty of the area makes it worth trying.

Marthe48

(20,362 posts)
4. Thank you
Fri Mar 14, 2025, 11:19 AM
Mar 14

I have a pen pal in Montana. We've never met, but she always encouraged my writing. One year, she asked me for some samples of my poetry for a local art guild project. Artists chose from the selection of poetry offered by several writers and painted their interpretation of the poems. My friend sent me pictures of the creations based on poems I offered. This poem was one of those. When I saw the pictures, I cried. Such an honor. I still have the pictures and the memory of joy

BobTheSubgenius

(11,945 posts)
5. Lovely!
Sun Mar 16, 2025, 12:05 PM
Mar 16

Hopeful, nostalgic, melancholy, as well as several other adjectives. There is a LOT going on in comparatively few characters.

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