Writing
Related: About this forumI wrote this poem in 2005
Inspired by daffodils
Continuum
In this empty place
there is peace
the sense of time gone by
Amid bare trees, their limbs upraised
to the spring blue sky,
submerged in greening grass
there are mossy rocks
tumbled long ago
--foundation walls, supporting nothing now
walls and roof long returned to earth
Almost by the trees
that row of tiny brilliant suns
was planted there by long-forgotten hands
small clumps ease nearer to the patient humble stones
Its almost quiet now
you only hear the wind
scraping branches
soughing through the grass
In this empty place
the lengths of time -- then and now --
lay side-by-side
What once was, will it be again?
There is no agreement
but gently
the daffodils nod.

Karadeniz
(24,043 posts)Marthe48
(20,362 posts)The remains of early farms are scattered all through the area, in the fields, woods, down in the valleys, and in the hills. Seems like no matter where the homestead was, you'll find the foundation stones and daffodils, reminders of the earliest European settlers who tried to make a go of carving their niche out of the land. No one will get rich here, but the beauty of the area makes it worth trying.
wendyb-NC
(4,165 posts)Marthe48
(20,362 posts)I have a pen pal in Montana. We've never met, but she always encouraged my writing. One year, she asked me for some samples of my poetry for a local art guild project. Artists chose from the selection of poetry offered by several writers and painted their interpretation of the poems. My friend sent me pictures of the creations based on poems I offered. This poem was one of those. When I saw the pictures, I cried. Such an honor. I still have the pictures and the memory of joy
BobTheSubgenius
(11,945 posts)Hopeful, nostalgic, melancholy, as well as several other adjectives. There is a LOT going on in comparatively few characters.
Marthe48
(20,362 posts)I tried to shape it, more than earlier poems that I wrote.