Poetry

The Madcap

(574 posts) Sun Nov 3, 2024, 04:11 PM Nov 3

Snow

White carpet cold stretched to the beyond
A frozen field infinite in its brightness
Blinding and silent in the chilled winter air
Icy wonder, the first snow of the season

Unbroken by footprints in the morning sunrise
A floor of cold crystals in front of me
Pearls of ice hang from twisted branches above
As I look ahead and take my first step

An explosion of sound blasts through the air
Breaking the silence of the winter morning
As I spoil the purity of the freshly laid snow
Ruining forever the innocence around me

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Snow (Original Post) The Madcap Nov 3 OP

Your descriptions are good and so are the way you use metaphors. CaliforniaPeggy Nov 3 #1

Thank you for the encouragement! The Madcap Nov 3 #2

Lovely!!! I once drove strsight into a snowbank i couldnt see bevause Karadeniz Nov 3 #3

I can actually "see" what you wrote. Marvelous description. Thank you. LoisB Nov 3 #4

I was picturing stepping out of a cabin The Madcap Nov 3 #5

CaliforniaPeggy

(152,443 posts)

1. Your descriptions are good and so are the way you use metaphors.

Reply to The Madcap (Original post)

Sun Nov 3, 2024, 04:18 PM

Nov 3

Keep writing!

The Madcap

(574 posts)

2. Thank you for the encouragement!

Reply to CaliforniaPeggy (Reply #1)

Sun Nov 3, 2024, 04:27 PM

Nov 3

After the election, I'm going to try to write a bit less on politics/social issues...if things turn out right, that is. Lately, that just seems to be the focus of my attention.

Thanks again.