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Related: About this forumA very short poem sometimes called a lune for you.
no fun here
the woods are silent
crows move on
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A very short poem sometimes called a lune for you. (Original Post)
Harker
Nov 2020
OP
Harker
(15,295 posts)2. They'll be back
when the snow tails off a bit and the wind dies down.
MLAA
(18,712 posts)3. You really used your few words well in the lune. It really hit me as just lovely. 🙂
Harker
(15,295 posts)4. You're very kind to say so. Thank you.
Rather than viewing the form as limiting, I find the distillation process to broaden my way of experiencing the world.
lillypaddle
(9,605 posts)5. so ...
moon shimmers
the light is still there
though shadowed
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It's much harder than I thought to write a lune. Too many thoughts, not enough syllables or lines.
Harker
(15,295 posts)6. A Luna lune... love it!
Keep it up, sensei, and you'll be thinking them with little or no effort.
lillypaddle
(9,605 posts)8. You do your research
and send me to google.
Wonder what that would be called?
Harker
(15,295 posts)9. I'm not sure.
sunflower
now dried out and black
birdfeeder
lillypaddle
(9,605 posts)10. I have to think about that one
for awhile.
brief cloud gaps
shadows are reborn
glare off snow