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raccoon

(31,517 posts)
Mon Mar 17, 2014, 04:07 PM Mar 2014

I don't like a mystery where the story is told in first person, SPOILERS

and then it turns out in the end the narrator did it.

What, and all through the book, the narrator has been keeping it from the reader?
It ain't cricket.

Two cases I know of: THE PERFECT GHOST by Linda Barnes, and one of the Gordianus the
Finder books by Stephen Saylor (I don't remember which one.).



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I don't like a mystery where the story is told in first person, SPOILERS (Original Post) raccoon Mar 2014 OP
What's the problem? Curmudgeoness Mar 2014 #1
The problem is that sort of story ought to be told in third person. raccoon Mar 2014 #2
LOL, "I forgot to tell you....." Curmudgeoness Mar 2014 #3
I don't think there were any in the Barnes novel I just finished. raccoon Mar 2014 #4
Spoiler alert! SheilaT Mar 2014 #5
They are more interesting getting old in mke Mar 2014 #6

Curmudgeoness

(18,219 posts)
1. What's the problem?
Mon Mar 17, 2014, 06:22 PM
Mar 2014

It is a mystery, and the narrator keeps you guessing. Isn't that the point? Sure would be a shitty book if the narrator told you right in the first chapter....what would be the point of finishing the book?

raccoon

(31,517 posts)
2. The problem is that sort of story ought to be told in third person.
Tue Mar 18, 2014, 04:19 AM
Mar 2014

The point of a mystery is the author drops hint(s) in the book, so that looking back you
can see, Oh, yes, that would indicate that so-and-so did it.

As opposed to dragging something in at the last minute, Oh, I forgot to tell you that I did it.

Curmudgeoness

(18,219 posts)
3. LOL, "I forgot to tell you....."
Tue Mar 18, 2014, 07:25 PM
Mar 2014

I have to admit that I have not read any books in this style, or I don't remember reading any. So maybe it doesn't work well. So, are you saying that there are no clues along the way, or that most people ignore them because they never expect the story teller to be the culprit?

raccoon

(31,517 posts)
4. I don't think there were any in the Barnes novel I just finished.
Tue Mar 18, 2014, 07:45 PM
Mar 2014

And I've already returned it to the library, but no way would I go back and look for such clues.

But to me it's kind of like the dream trick. Where all this is happening to somebody and they woke up and ---voila, it was only a dream!

(Yeah, I know Lewis Carroll did it, but that was a long time ago, and a children's book.)

I don't remember seeing it in literature other than that, but I've seen it in grade B- movies.








 

SheilaT

(23,156 posts)
5. Spoiler alert!
Wed Mar 19, 2014, 11:51 PM
Mar 2014

The original novel like this was an Agatha Christie novel, The Murder of Roger Ackroyd originally published in 1926. When I finally got around to reading it some years back, I was about halfway through when I stumbled across something or another that gave away the plot. Damn! It's the ONLY time that's ever happened to me.

It's still a novel worth reading.

I think your problem is that everything after is a pale imitation. Try reading the original.

getting old in mke

(813 posts)
6. They are more interesting
Thu Mar 20, 2014, 01:16 PM
Mar 2014

if things are revealed bit by bit that shows that the narrator is unreliable. The whole thing turns into a "can I trust what's being said is actually so."

We rarely give flesh-and-blood humans unlimited credence. We just do it more readily to narrators in books.

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