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raccoon

(31,517 posts)
Sun Sep 15, 2013, 07:50 AM Sep 2013

I wish fiction writers wouldn't write in the present tense.

Example:

Dick sees Spot across the street and whistles to him. Spot comes bounding over to Dick.

And it seems to be more and more prevalent these days.....aargh!

Fiction writers, please quit it!

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I wish fiction writers wouldn't write in the present tense. (Original Post) raccoon Sep 2013 OP
Is this a current fad? krispos42 Sep 2013 #1
I like to read non-current stuff as well, 1970's and 80's. nt raccoon Sep 2013 #2
That, and the lack of quotation marks.... dixiegrrrrl Sep 2013 #3
Oh, thank god that I have not run into that yet. Curmudgeoness Sep 2013 #4
If the lack of quotation marks bugs you...... Paladin Sep 2013 #9
You give your age away. Curmudgeoness Sep 2013 #5
Pynchon's taking on 9/11. I'll cut him some slack. (nt) Paladin Sep 2013 #8
I spend a whole year LWolf Sep 2013 #6
I agree. And it's all too common. SheilaT Sep 2013 #7
Elly Griffiths DUgosh Oct 2013 #10

krispos42

(49,445 posts)
1. Is this a current fad?
Sun Sep 15, 2013, 07:57 AM
Sep 2013

Makes me wince, although I've seen it in stuff that's narrated. I think it's done to increase tension.


But nothing I read is current, currently.

I just read "The Thin Red Line", and I'm rereading some Dan Brown "Deception Point". Don't judge me...

dixiegrrrrl

(60,011 posts)
3. That, and the lack of quotation marks....
Sun Sep 15, 2013, 11:45 AM
Sep 2013

I won't read anything with no quotation marks...
reading is supposed to be relaxing, dammit, not a chore.

Paladin

(28,979 posts)
9. If the lack of quotation marks bugs you......
Mon Sep 16, 2013, 11:50 AM
Sep 2013

you might have a problem with McKinlay Kantor's classic Civil War novel, "Andersonville." I've seen it referred to as one of the three best novels ever written about the Civil War (the other two being "The Killer Angels" and "The Red Badge of Courage&quot . The lack of quotation marks is a bit distracting at first, but it's something you get used to, and it is one hell of a great book.....

Curmudgeoness

(18,219 posts)
5. You give your age away.
Sun Sep 15, 2013, 04:42 PM
Sep 2013

That example is priceless!

I have not noticed this present tense fad, and I am not sure if I would notice it or not. But you can be sure that I will pay attention from now on, and will see it whenever it comes up.


On edit: Aggghhhhh! I have already stumbled onto an example that is not Dick and Jane, in the next OP that I opened, regarding Pynchon's newest book-----------“On the way home she passes the neighborhood firehouse. They’re in working on one of the trucks. . . . She threads among the daily bunches of flowers on the sidewalk..."

LWolf

(46,179 posts)
6. I spend a whole year
Sun Sep 15, 2013, 05:26 PM
Sep 2013

explaining this to 6th graders, who give me the "deer in the headlight" look, because that's the way they talk, and they don't notice they're rambling all over various tenses.

Published fiction writers, and their editors, should know better.

In my opinion.

 

SheilaT

(23,156 posts)
7. I agree. And it's all too common.
Mon Sep 16, 2013, 12:59 AM
Sep 2013

Recently I read something that alternated between present and past tense, and it was very distracting.

DUgosh

(3,107 posts)
10. Elly Griffiths
Thu Oct 3, 2013, 07:51 PM
Oct 2013

Writes Ruth Galloway mystery series that has potential, but is such an awkward read.... "Ruth is getting her her car" "Ruth drives down the lane" "Ruth drives up and sees her front door open" frankly this reader is getting exhausted

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