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Taverner

(55,476 posts)
Mon Jan 23, 2012, 08:33 PM Jan 2012

I wanna write some lyrics. Give me some homework!

I learned bass by studying and playing with Paul McCartney, Prakash John and Mike Gordon.

I learned guitar by studying and playing with The Stones, The Beatles, Lou Reed and VU.

I learned keyboard by - -well I learned that when I was 6. And in all truth, I learned guitar when I was 14...

BUT I DIDN'T GET GOOD at the guitar until I was in Peace Corps and played along with my 12 string to all that stuff. And later with my Strat.

Keyboards - want a fun one? Fender Rhodes virtual organ to Stones' You Can't Always Get What You Want.

Seriously, that's the bomb

Anyway - I need to write lyrics. Who should I study?

Everything I write sounds like shit.

I'm a Journalist/Tech Writer, not a Bob Dylan, dammit!

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I wanna write some lyrics. Give me some homework! (Original Post) Taverner Jan 2012 OP
Oh and please don't say Dylan. Only Dylan can write like Dylan. Taverner Jan 2012 #1
I was a Deadhead before I was a "punk rocker"... GReedDiamond Jan 2012 #2
I was a punk rocker i_sometimes Jan 2012 #3
Some of my favorite song writers? jeepnstein Jan 2012 #4
how about Tom Petty or Neil Young? try to make it rhyme. limpyhobbler Jan 2012 #5
how about Leonard Cohen Whisp Jan 2012 #6
Ooh. OK. That works. Everybody knows.... Taverner Jan 2012 #7
Tower of Song, yum Whisp Jan 2012 #8
ok, I'll give you some homework. Whisp Jan 2012 #9
I tried this and it worked! Taverner Feb 2012 #11
yay. you going to post what you did? Whisp Feb 2012 #12
The Church, Steve Kilbey is an excellent lyricist. Saving Hawaii Feb 2012 #10
 

Taverner

(55,476 posts)
1. Oh and please don't say Dylan. Only Dylan can write like Dylan.
Mon Jan 23, 2012, 08:34 PM
Jan 2012

Anyone else sounds like they're aping Dylan.


GReedDiamond

(5,379 posts)
2. I was a Deadhead before I was a "punk rocker"...
Mon Jan 23, 2012, 11:10 PM
Jan 2012

...and I always enjoyed the lyrics of Robert Hunter, Grateful Dead lyricist.

Also, Captain Beefheart.

Just off the top of my head.

And my band, Green Sparkle Frog.

 

i_sometimes

(201 posts)
3. I was a punk rocker
Tue Jan 24, 2012, 09:40 AM
Jan 2012

before I got into The Dead! I had to learn more than three chords though to follow along.

I have no tips for writing lyrics though, my head is full of songs, so much so that when I do write, I can see the traces of them, especially the Indigo Girls.

jeepnstein

(2,631 posts)
4. Some of my favorite song writers?
Tue Jan 24, 2012, 09:54 AM
Jan 2012

Darrell Scott.
Townes Van Zandt
Eminem - Seriously.

Most importantly, you have to study yourself. Just like writing music is all about getting that sound in your head out there to the world writing lyrics is about telling the world all about that thing you wish to share. Good lyricists are good story tellers.

 

Whisp

(24,096 posts)
6. how about Leonard Cohen
Fri Jan 27, 2012, 07:59 PM
Jan 2012

he was/is a poet/writer before a songwriter/singer/musician so should be right up your alley.

 

Whisp

(24,096 posts)
9. ok, I'll give you some homework.
Sun Jan 29, 2012, 10:39 AM
Jan 2012

write something about shopping for groceries.
make the mundane something more.

Saving Hawaii

(441 posts)
10. The Church, Steve Kilbey is an excellent lyricist.
Fri Feb 17, 2012, 05:29 PM
Feb 2012

Remote Luxury, Heyday, and Starfish are all good older (80s) albums.
After Everything, Forget Yourself, Uninvited, and Untitled are all good newer (00s) albums.

I never did like anything they were putting out in the 90s... I don't think they did either. It was a painful transition for them between their older, poppier sound and what they're doing now, which is substantially different.

If you need lyrics, this is the site for 'em: http://homepage.mac.com/fipster/church/albums/church-albums.html

EDIT: And no, it's not a religious band. I'm pretty certain none of them are even Christians.

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